We all know that all of us needs to eat. Every breakfast, lunch, and dinner, we eat to sustain our physical health. Have you ever thought of our spiritual health?
Living in a musically inclined family, I am challenged to be the best. When I was a child, I would always wonder, why would we make music when you could download them from the internet? When I grew up, I gained a better understanding of what music really is.
Music is just like food, but instead of eating them, we listen to them. Music feeds our soul and makes our spirit healthy. God gave us music so that we could enjoy our lives and make the most out of it. Music is the food for our soul.
Don't forget to "eat."
by: Tristan Juansing
Hi Tristan, it is interesting to note that there is depth in the subject of this entry; however, the manner by which the entry was organized needs to be improved.
ReplyDeleteSpiritual health as we (or I, generally) understand it, is connected to our relationship with the Lord. Maybe you are referring to health of our soul? Because this flow of idea and content may confuse your readers.
I like the idea that you shared something about yourself and your family but it has to be clearer that the exposure to constantly making music is a form of release and refreshing the soul.
Please make improvements.